A Walk To Nowhere

Peace from all the anxieties.

Headphones on my head,
No more music on the bed,
Ain't no worries nor sorrows there,
Its my walk to nowhere.

Nothing to hold, nothing to lose,
Ain't no competition,nor any boos.
Not to complete! nothing to spare,
Its my walk to nowhere.

Walk in peace, nature's surround,
Ain't any destiny,imaginations all around.
Close up eyes, there's no aware,
Its my walk to nowhere.

Hands in my pocket, walking ahead,
Ain't no company, nothing to expect.
Walk aside blues, peace in the air,
Its my walk to nowhere.

Reviews

[Manu]

Congratulations Farhan for always trying to write something different. You are just 17 yet you write very nicely. I see really a good writer in you.

A walk to nowhere- we all get tired at some point of time in life and feel like keep on going to some place unknown without being seen and without being herd. I loved the content of this poem.
Nice imagery too, you have used very nice words throughout.
Keep experimenting and keep writing, Farhan!
You are going in a right direction.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Gorthi..u just motivated me😊

[Cœur]

Nice repetition and rhyme scheme.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

oh my god!
you are such a wonderful and magical writer!
i wonder you did a spell on yourself and made your thoughts so pretty and beautiful and heart touching!
i just love the way you express each stanza ,each line of your poem!
and secondly,i am going totally spellbound after reading your poetry...
and let me tell you,your imagination is magic,it leaves me speechless!
farhan! stay blessed and keep writing such wonderful and magical pieces.;)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much for your kind words it really means alot😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure farhan

[Silmara McGarry]

I almost sing it wile I was reading it :-) This could be a great song. You should write more like this. I Really enjoy it.

All best
:-)
Sil

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Sil..it really means alot and I'll write more

[prachi prangya agasti]

Nice one... keep going...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Jessica Lima]

The end of the second stanza didn't make much sense to me but the poem as a whole... I quite like it! I hope to read more from you.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😊

[Valentine]

Nothing like listening to music to soothe the nerves and give us inspiration. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for stopping by

[Lovecraft]

I really like the rhythm of this poem, it's almost like a song at times. I enjoyed the informal language, nice change of pace compared to most others.

It's quite good. "It's my walk to nowhere" is a great line.

Good job, Farhan! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much friend

[Johnny Dep]

Walk to nowhere, playing some music in your head.
As a male, I could say that's the best life a man can get, hahaha.
Thank you Farhan for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right you are johny😉...btw thank you

[Harley Quinn]

I love it. I hope you write more poems like this one. Great work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so w Erika..and I'll try to write more