Ride to everywhere

Turn up the volume, No one's for commune. Let me accelerate my car, Let me drive away far.

No, there ain't any tense, Nor anybody who'll offence. Dancing alone in the pub, Singing alone in the club.

I won't give explanation, I'm the boss here I'm alone. I don't need anybody, Let me go far from everybody.

I will ride for a lifetime, There's nothing as bedtime. I've been high, I've been low, I won't find a way back to home.

No one to tell me what to do,

No one to lead me,

Ain't any job, ain't any roles. I can go anywhere, Because it's my ride to nowhere.

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

Interesting piece.
We've all been in that...leave me alone...phase, I'm sure. You express it with words that paint rich imagery. Nice job.

[Giulia King]

I feel like your poems are starting to get a bit better :) Keep it up

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Gullia it means a alot☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Freedom. Rarely known and when gone missed.
"I will ride for a lifetime, There's nothing as bedtime. I've been high, I've been low, I won't find a way back to home"
I liked the complete poem and the above lines were my favorite. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ur welcome and thnx for the kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Haniya]

Farhan, I think you write very good realistic pieces of literature. I feel that you just pull every reader in because what you wrote above symbolizes what every young adult wants. Good job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Exactly hanu..thank you so much

[Shabeeh Haider]

It's a strange journey that can take us nowhere.
Many have traveled this route.
Very nicely expressed

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That feeling of being high is indeed a ride to nowhere but it's the best feeling at times...
I enjoyed this ride to nowhere leading to somewhere 😉
Good work, Farhan 👍

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Krutika]

Very Nice. I think everybody thinks like this at some point of their lives. A suppressed rebel coming out unannounced!

Props to you that even with simple words you succeed it in putting a lot of depth in it.Tone of the piece matches the underlying theme. Thanks for sharing :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you krutika for your kind words

[APOORVA]

a broken heart is a deadliest heart, shouldn't be messed up with at all..........
loved it, brave heart

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you apoorva

[Surya]

A broken heart finds it's way....A traveller always does...I liked it Farhan..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Surya, u r ryt😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wow wow wow!
this sounds crazy and amazing i must say!
i mean it's all so true!
keep it going farhan,great work...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you wajiha😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure farhan.