Lost Love

All the choices you made

Were thrown on me like a grenade.

My world was black, 

I am moving on, please don't come back.

I gave you whatever I could,

I loved you more than I should.

First you accepted and then said  no

I then realised, it is time to let go.

You are not worthy of my love

But there is no other girl I placed above.

For our future you were confused,

But then I ended up getting used.

Your ex dominated your love again

You didn't think about me, you left me in vain.  

Future we planned; All the kisses that we shared

My love for you will forever be rare. 

Less but beautiful was the time we spent

Said loving words that we atleast I meant.

I loved you with all my heart, so truly

Then also you left me so easily.

So I decided to leave your life

Parting with you feels like I am stabbed with a knife.

I hope one day you'll realise

That my love was not a disguise.

Wounds you gave are hard to heal

My feelings and love for you was real.

I may never find anyone like you again

Losing you is not a loss but a gain.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and good words shared.
"Wounds you gave are hard to heal
My feelings and love for you was real.
I may never find anyone like you again
Losing you is not a loss but a gain."
The above is true when the love turn cold and black. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Avia]

I liked reading this. It hurts to love and have your heart broken. Feelings can be so stressful. It's good to be able to express them, even when they hurt, Instead of bottling them up inside. Very good. I hope the hurt goes away soon.

[Hebe]

Pouring your pain out is the best healer.... simplistic and pure.

[Haniya]

The way that you turned what you lost into something so beautiful is amazing. I'm so proud of you for writing an emotional piece that truly tugs at my heartstrings. Good Job!

[wordman]

sometimes it just don`t work out,just remember the good times you shared,learn from your mistakes and find a true love

[Tabby Mac]

The love you speak of reminds me of sonnet 116. This piece overflows with emotion and heartfelt cries...very powerful.
Tabby

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

You've portrayed the loss so well! I especially love how you're telling her to not come back because you're moving on. A wonderful read. Thank you for sharing!

Love'
Vasilees

[Najam Us Saher]

It is always very hard to deal with when one decides to leave, such people leaves footprint in our hear forever. I really liked the rhyme and last line the most above all.