Feelings That Chime

Feelings That Chime

A Poem by Destiny Dreamer
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There are many words, many feelings that can relate to one another, many people can relate their selves to the words a poet writes.

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Feelings That Chime

Have you ever felt the pain,
like you have lost more than you gain,
like the heart you own is broken
because of the many words left unspoken

Have you ever felt alone,
in the crowd of all known
Like heart hurts to say a word,
broken heart made your vision blurred

Have you ever been so high,
like you are completely free to fly
Then all your dreams, they're shattered
because of all the things which once you flattered

Well, precious let not poor thoughts lead you down,
if you are happy, if your aren't, be like a clown
Cover your pain with a smile and laughter
let your foe think, your life is happily ever after

Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime

© 2015 Destiny Dreamer



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Destiny Dreamer
Thanks A lot for stopping by, hope you'll enjoy! :)

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I agree with your logic.
"Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime"
Old wisdom. Failure, just lessons for us to not repeat the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

2 Years Ago

Yeah! And Thank You very very much for your kind review! :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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A very very very nice poem. the way you relate everything to another is

Posted 2 Years Ago


Thank you for brightening my day :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I loved everything in the poem from the title to the last line. You've portrayed the reality of life excellently. Really, really well done! :)

Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime

These are such great lines giving off a powerful aura of positivity. A superb conclusion to an equally superb poem. Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Oh yes I did enjoy!!! Hi Dreamer. Sorry this has taken so long, but I have just returned to site. You have written this with great expression!!! I can feel the caring, the friendly hand you extend, and I just loved the read!!! Please send me more to read!!! alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


'feel good' write. I enjoyed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A very beautiful and enchanting piece.....a bit dipped in sadness but always calling to the strong side one has....

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love your work
Your words scream emotions and is very clear

And you have such intensity in all your writes

You capture a moment so well

Posted 2 Years Ago


WoW! Just, wow!..............

Posted 2 Years Ago


Absolutely agree Dreamer. Time makes you heal every wound if you decide to initiate your step first. Good one

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Have you ever felt alone,
in the crowd of all known
Like heart hurts to say a word,
broken heart made your vision blurred"

I must say I have dreamer... sometimes thats exactly what my darker, sad pieces are about. Beautiful write :)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Destiny Dreamer
Destiny Dreamer

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Hi! I love Poetry. I am writing since I was 13 and Words can't explain my Passion. I am very very Passionate writer and Poet. I love Poems. I want to be a Successful writer and Poet. I fell in LOVE wi.. more..

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