Remember me (Lyrics)

"I want nothing more from you, but at least just remember our LOVE"

I know that your gone now,

And I'm so alone now,

with all your memories,

 my heart aches with worries

I don't really care what hurts,

'cause I still remember the scent of your shirt

and the way, your naughty flirt

(Pre-Chorus)

I'm still standing there, where you left me

Want nothing more, just want to plea 

(Chorus) 

Remember me, Remember me,

will you remember me, say you'll remember me

Want nothing more, don't really wanna start a war

Just want to plea, please remember me

Will you at least just remember me?

In my hallway I hung you pic,

I stare it day and night, no matter if it makes me sick

I talk to you whole day, do you even know?

I bet you'll ask me, how so?

I stand before your picture, and say everything I want to

How much I miss you, do You even have a clue?

I was such a happy girl, and you came and made me blue

(Pre-Chorus)

Well, I'm still standing there, where you left me

want nothing more, just want to plea

(Chorus) 

Remember me, Remember me,

will you remember me, say you'll remember me

Want nothing more, don't really wanna start a war

Just want to plea, please remember me

Will you at least just remember me?

All the love we shared, admit it that we cared

I was like your air, without you I was scared

How we'd sit in the stairs, shared everything so rare

I still cry for you my tears, I won't forget those memories I swear

I know your gone now, and I'm here alone now

But at least just remember the love we shared

The memories we cared so much for

Even though, the ending is so sore

Just remember me, will you remember me?

I'll remember You. this is true

Just remember me, and I'll remember You

At least just remember me

Reviews

[B]

I know how this feels
My ex husband
I went through a phase of just that
Then when he remembered me
I was long gone
I cherish him doing it till this day
and i will always remember him
but you move on
so people can live better everyone
peacefully and nicely

you are beautiful doing it in a song
i wasnt that kind

[Irenic]

you made the emotion of sadness and effect of someone's absence visible.

Love it.........:)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot Cutie :)

[Irenic]

welcome.........................:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. Very hard to create song. I needed some music to make the very good poem perfect. I like how you used the language. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Thank YOU so much, again your review is AMAZING. It makes me more and more courageous to write! THANKS A LOT!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Writing music is hard. The Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen are a few. Neil young wasn't too bad either as a song writers.

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH! Exactly, it is very hard ... And I don't even have any musical instrument to use and write song and know what will rhyme well and etc! BUt I try 'cause I'm way too much passionate!

[The Josh of Oki]

Totally relatable:) keep up the good work~...wish I could've read it accompanied to a melody haha

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww THANK YOU so much! Same here ^_^ :D

[Kousika]

Good my dear friend... The essence is good.. I loved it..

[Destiny Dreamer]

THANK YOU so much CUTIE! :*:*:*

[theshygirl]

I love it !!!!!! Its so good

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww Thank YOU SO MUCH ... For stopping by and checking my stUff :)

[Lizardo]

Well this one is an interesting one, I really like the lyrics! Would like to hear them in a song though lol.
I really like them, it carries the reall scent of love and moving on (Putting those together, at least for me, is a pain in the head or maybe not lol) Great lyrics and great write, thanks for sharing

[Destiny Dreamer]

lOl same here. Would love to hear at least one of my lyrics in a song :D Thank YOU so mUch. Your review means A lot :)

[guy drori]

A poem that is very straight forward and isn't afraid to show true emotion. I like it :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup.. THANKS A LOT! :) And besides, a poet or writer shouldn't be afraid to show their feelings, that's how they can have the best of it :) THANK YOU! ^_^

[Robert]

Beautifully done here Dreamer. This takes a special telnet to be a song writer and it appears from this piece that you have that talent. The one thing that might be better than reading this his actually hearing someone sing it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww Really THANK YOU from the core of my Heart! :) Thank YOU so much, this is so ENCOURAGING! ^_^

[ANTO]

get this typo out of the way first "...ending is so soar ..."- *soar should be sore.
This is amazing. Its one of if not thee best song I've encountered on WC, Dreamer.
Just perfect.
The sadness and the bittersweetness is right up my street. Kudos
:))

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oops THANK YOU! :) I did :) Awwww really this is the best Compliment I've ever heard on the WC and this means A lot to me! Thanks AGAIN! :)