The Days of Spring

The Days of Spring

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ memories of new love ~

"

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie
Pash

5 Years Ago

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no t.. read more
RED

5 Years Ago

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, .. read more



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Nicely written and thanks for sharing, I enjoyed this piece too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I sure can take note from a good teacher. love the poem and thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful I love this so much makes me look forward to our Aussie spring

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very magical! Felt like I was transported to another world when reading! Great work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


A perfect love poem. I'm giving you 100/100.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Roland :) Julie
“I still can taste
the morning sun and honey dew
tracing the curve of me and you
My heart fluttered…the days of spring
of butterflies on painted wing”

Wonderful expressions

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

:) yvw
A delightful and lovely piece. The imagery is just Perfection, like a perfect Spring day.




Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
To a poet, spring and winter .. these two seasons're alike wanderland where his love for all wanders across hearts. In winter, it wants to be cold, but as the shine of spring comes down, the heart glows more & searches new love.. to live a very new life along its curves. Memories are must in both seasons which keep heart always around ecstasy. Beautiful poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I agree. I love the days of Spring.
"My heart fluttered…the days of spring
of butterflies on painted wing"
Warm days and less clothing. Happy people wandering the field of flowers. Spring. Thank you Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 5 Years Ago


For those who have known you for a long time, we can read so much more in your poetry you always have an incredible ways expressing yourself so beautifully in them. Happy Easter my friend. :) Larry

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Larry. Happy Easter :) Julie
onceloved

5 Years Ago

You are always welcome Julie. I have come to know the many side of you because of your poetry that I.. read more

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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