Illusion or Eternal

Illusion or Eternal

A Poem by Forgotten

What is love?
Is it merely just an illusion of the mind or is it something more?
Is it really the start of an eternal bond of two lonely souls?

You give up searching for the one, your mind lets u believe so,
but do you ever really give up?
Or does the spirit inside still search and long for the companion of another?

You think you've found her, the soul
fire
light
and friend,
Can two souls really join in an eternal bond?
Or just form the barrier to stop others from entering?

What is love?
An illusion of the mind or the eternal bond of two lonely souls,
No-one will ever truly know,
but your souls love will always live on when you find your bond and companion

© 2011 Forgotten


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This was beautiful and it took me into a deeper understanding of what love and fate is, this was excellent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awe so sweet as to what love is? is an universal question but, your answer is good. Well done in the description of soul mate and it limits may be an illusion to the mind but, eternal in the heart. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the question you ask.
The poem is very nice. A question that I often ask myself. Good write.
- Sarah

Posted 12 Years Ago


I believe love is more then we realize. Love of a parent or grandparent is needed for us to stand strong and live a good life. Love of another can make us content or knock us down. Without emotion what would we be? I told my children. Slow and easy into love. Few of us have a lot to share and give. I like the logic of this poem. We need love in a life to keep us human. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can relate to this, nice work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I read this at just the right time. Its so...I don't even know how to explain it. All I know is that I love how honest you are when you write. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 15, 2010
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Forgotten

Gloucestershire, Stroud, United Kingdom



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My real name is John-Paul Crawford, I do voluntary work at Stroud FM and hopefully after my training will be allowed my own slot on air. Writing takes up most of my time, I'm always trying to better m.. more..

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