Second Chance

Defeat---

a dark horse, always

haunting the future

with a death's head glance.

Spectre of failure

persistant, gnawing

at future hope.

Some seem cursed

by time and fate.

 

Yet all they need

is a second chance.

 

Reviews

[msharma]

Very true description. A nice blend of ideas. thanks for posting.

[watch_the_world]

This is really good and really true. I liked the last stanza cuz I thought it kinda brought the whole thing together. It was good. Thanks for posting ^-^