A wish

A poem I just made.

I will tell you a thought of mine. You're possibly asking yourself "What kind of thought is this?" Well actually, it's like a prayer.  

I don't wish for money. 

I don't wish for jewels. 

I just wish to breathe,

If I do, I could break free  

Not the breathing of "Inhale and exhale" in a physical way , I'm talking about the spiritual and emotional way.  

That if I'm okay in the outside, in my insides too. 

I don't want to overthink too much. 

I don't want to feel the urgency of wanting to climb up a mountain and scream, even though I cry a lot.

I want to have a break. 

To have some peace,  to have some space. 

To feel that I'm out of worries and weights. 

This is my wish. 

A simple, sad, and most wanted wish.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[dementedreality]

You're possibly asking[]yourself "What kind of thought is this?" Well actually i[t']s like a pray[er],


I just wish to breathe, [that] I could break free
I just wish to breathe, [I just wish] I could break free
I just wish to breathe, [wish] I could break free
I just wish to breathe, [wish] I could break free
I just wish [I could] breath, [I just wish] I could break free
Just wish [I could] breath, [just wish] I could break free
(This is a stylistic choice more than grammatical)

That if I'm okay in the outside,[]my insides [are] too.

I don't want to feel the urgency of wanting to climb up a mountain and scream even tho[ugh] I cried a lot.

[G.A. Wonders]

I'm going todo fix it, thanks! :D

[Jade]

This is really good, Like this lots of emotion in it. Very well expressed

[G.A. Wonders]

Thanks!! I really appreciate it!!