Biohazardous War

Biohazardous War

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 6/1/15. Challenge with sereenaoutloud. Challenge was to write something inspired by the biohazard picture.

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Taking a breath;
I breathed to deeply
And let you in.
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Blind to your intentions
I let you get too close
And your virus infected me.
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Trying to fight the contagion
But I feel you
Coursing through my veins.
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This deadly disease
Is eating away at me
It's started a war in me.
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And now I realize
It's to late for me
There is no cure
For this biohazardous war.
[End]



I don't remember
When I let her take me over; the other side of me
But I know it was long ago.

She has been consuming me
For so long,
Her darkness has now seeped into
Every crevice of my being.

The infection
Slowly devours my logic
Filling it's place with screams of deception
Causing my heart to feel the wrath
Of her false truths.
[End]


© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



Author's Note

GreenEyedPoet


For this challenge in my case I was inspired to write two poems.
The song only goes with the first poem.

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great poetry... very creative... thanks to Sereena for challenging you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks!
Haha we challeneged each other. :P
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Rm
Wild and creative! Good piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Rocky! :]
Rm

2 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
Two beautiful poems right here, again :) Lol. The two poems actually remind me of three things. One, how toxic some relationships can be. Two, this is how falling for someone feels like. Sometimes you don't even realize it until it's already there. And third, the relationship I had with someone before. Lol. Anyway.. Two great poems, both have lots of feelings behind them. Overall... I really like them :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

You are too sweet Anne, thank you! I'm really glad you liked them! :D
Anne Verona

2 Years Ago

No problem :)
POEM 1 - This works so well on the physical and the metaphorical planes Ashley. Love is like the billions of bacteria in our systems - some beneficial and some not so. Breathe in too deeply and you can get fatally injured - breathe too shallow and yes, you may feel protected but you wont ever know the ecstasy of loving someone wholly.
POEM 2 - I like the old skool narrative style of this in as much as I could imagine it being the opening spoken word/ voice over on a vintage episode of Twilight Zone. Getting to a place of mind and heart that you can't remember travelling to as a result of a creeping kind of love. It gave me shivers Ashley.
Great twin piece here. :)
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

So very true about the love thing. I kinda see it as you have two choices when it comes to love, pla.. read more
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Cool both of them. How creative both of you are is beyond words. And the song perfectly matches!
well done!! :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks MS. :]
Haha yea I thought that song was perfect, I thought it before I even started wr.. read more
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2 Years Ago

songs have that effect on us, they are infectious ;D
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

They definitely are!
Well written, both are fantastic!
I can't pick a favorite, but I sure did enjoy reading then both:)
I figured you took the time to write 2, so I thought it was my
duty to read them twice, and it was worth it:) Thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha you didn't have to read them twice, but I'm glad you thought they were worth the second read. :.. read more
Jamestown

2 Years Ago

UR welcome, Keep them coming:)
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

You know I will, I don't plan to stop writing any time soon. :D
OMG i cannot believe you wrote 2, that is awesome!
They are both strong pieces.
"trying to fight the contagion"
Love it! The song goes perfectly with both...you clearly got inspired by this and it shows it these 2 amazing writes!! Go Girlie x

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha yup!
Great minds think alike, they say. :P
sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Yep so true. Even has similarities especially your second write!! So awesome! :)
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I had such high hopes for that second one, but heh not the first time I'm not happy with something I.. read more
Nice, well written and overall a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you llerah, glad you enjoyed reading it. :]

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