Country Side

Country Side

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 7/2/15. Miles of country side. [Inspiration from taking a road trip]

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Passenger seat
Laid back
Miles of
Green acres,
Blue skies
Covered with white smoke
[End]

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



Author's Note

GreenEyedPoet
First picture is what originally inspired the poem. The second picture was taken after I wrote it, thought it looked cool so wanted to post it!

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There is such beauty all around us. When we drink it in on a road trip, it makes for an interesting adventure. Great imagery here. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

It does make for an interesting adventure!
And I'm hoping I'll have more to write about since.. read more
It's as though God has opened the windows to heaven - and rays of light are streaming down to give us hope for a better day!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

That was what I was thinking. :)
We call them 'God Clouds'. I never get to see stuff like thi.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Years Ago

It certainly makes for a lovely view, doesn't it?
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Sure does! :D
the poem is a perfect description of the picture...I like the idea of the clouds being white smoke...creative phrasing there.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob! Glad you liked it. :D
I remembered our family road trips when I read this. I just love the imagery in this one! Wonderfully written! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Valerie!
Glad I could bring back some memories for ya! :D
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Love road trips. Love to drive and absolutely love to just breathe in the scenery. You did a great job sharing a piece of your trip. :D
Cool pictures!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks girlie!
Haha this was one of the few actual good moments of the road trip, I had to wr.. read more
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2 Years Ago

It would be so much fun to see them. 😊
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Then you shall see them. :)
I'll try to send them tomorrow when I wake up, if not then then t.. read more
You make it sound like so much fun and it brings back some memories too.




100/100

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Palewriter! I'm glad I made it sound fun lol. Cause it actually wasn't a good road trip lol.
Pale Writer

2 Years Ago

Whoops, sorry to hear that. lol
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

No worries! Lol.
Beautiful imagery in so few words. Very well penned and very nice picture

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Zahra! :)
They say sometimes a picture is worth a thousand words. Astounding corner of peace you shared :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ana! :)
a subtle and short description of the view from the window and a nice metaphor for clouds... love the picture, too... love those country side drives :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

yes, that is true... it is :)
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Well I'm off to go do some shopping, have a good day FT!
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2 Years Ago

have fun, Ashley, and thanks!
I love this and the road trip feel! The description of the sky being smoke covered brilliant !!
The photo is beautiful!! Awesome girlie!'

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks sis! Glad you liked it! :D
sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

It's just a beautiful write, so calming and the photo is awseome the Rays of light beaming through t.. read more
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

You are too sweet girlie! :D
And yea I love that picture too, I never get to see stuff like t.. read more

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Added on July 4, 2015
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Tags: Road, Trip, Green, Acres, Blue, Skies, Clouds, Country

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