Tangled Up In You

Tangled Up In You

A Poem by GreenEyedPoet
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Written 7/25/15. You always give me a reason to smile.

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I keep catching myself
Getting tangled up in thoughts of you
I let myself dive into those thoughts
But I get yanked back to reality
When someone inquires
Why I'm smiling.

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They don't know
I'm daydreaming of the sweetness
That falls from your lips,
The way you assure me that you accept me as is,
Or how you have me altering my views
All because you've said one word - 'beautiful'.

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They don't know
That grin slipped onto my exterior
While I pictured being in your warm embrace,
Of intertwined fingers,
Or of whispered sweet nothing's.
[End]

© 2015 GreenEyedPoet



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Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "They don't know
I'm daydreaming of the sweetness
That falls from your lips,
The way you assure me that you accept me as is,
Or how you have me altering my views
All because you've said one word - 'beautiful'"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 2 Years Ago


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This is so beautiful!! Hope you are still tangling : )

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I missed you!
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2 Years Ago

likewise cutie!
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

How've you been?
The light of love shines bright.
Congratulations on your sweet tangle, dear poet.

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Misery! :)
Misery

2 Years Ago

Always welcome, dear poet.
Beautiful image to match these warm thoughts of a Man you love.

Regards,
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Alfred! :)
Such a good expression of your feelings, honest, heartfelt, true, longing. Beautifully written I truly love pieces like this that are straight from the heart. Good Job.

By the way why don't you sent RR to me? I do accept them?

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you Robert!

I never send RR's unless someone has asked me too.
Robert

2 Years Ago

Well I have asked so send them my way, haha.
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Haha will do.
Beautiful expression of love!!Oh to be in love...

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thanks Terry!
Haha not quite in love yet, but in very serious like. :D
I absolutely love this. Beautiful job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

Thank you hdean! :D
ah, the love we hold we keep inside, away from others so that we can enjoy it all to ourselves but those cheesy grins and smiles or our altered actions and mindsets give us away every time...this is beautiful, Ashley and a great picture :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

I know, right? Lol
Darn family! lol.

Oh and guess what? He wrote me a little p.. read more
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2 Years Ago

:) your first poem from him... that is awesome
GreenEyedPoet

2 Years Ago

It is! And I actually learned something from it too. :D

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Added on July 28, 2015
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