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A Poem by CookieMisfit1969

The vastness of the world,
I can hardly comprehend
Yet I find myself out of words
To sugarcoat this pain

© 2017 CookieMisfit1969



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This is very succinct and clear. It makes the meaning very sharp and focused, which is really nice. One thing that I see as "not working" is that you have an "i" uncapitalized, which I thought was a stylistic choice until I realized that the first letter in every other line is capitalized and another "i" in the poem is also capitalized, so I would try to stay consistent, whichever direction you go with that. Good work, this is a nice example of a short simple poem!

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CookieMisfit1969

1 Week Ago

Uh, yeah the i is an accident. I was in a hurry while writing it. Thank you for the review!

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CookieMisfit1969
CookieMisfit1969

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Hey there! Nice to meet you! CookieMisfit1969 here. i'm just the random kid you bump at the street barely surviving the world. Writing is my medicine. Keeps me entertained from my crazy ideas. Most o.. more..

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A Poem by CookieMisfit1969