Us

Us

A Poem by Leindor
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Just a thought that I had while thinking about how I can better inspire those around me. I sang it while I was writing, and I may add to it later.

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There's so much
Within the rest of us
To pull ourselves
up and out
To rise above the clouds

And there's enough
Within the best of us
To help those
Without a voice
Create wondrous sound

It's up to us all
To rise when we fall
Step forward and
Never look back

It's up to you
Right now to choose
To muster the
strength that you have

We're worth it
And you're worth it
Every little bit






© 2015 Leindor



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I really like the way you ended this poem. It is really simple, but also very powerful at the same time. It might be an interesting exercise to compress this piece and try to make it as brief as possible, and then post that as a separate poem. I always find that to be really helpful in narrowing down the most important ideas within a piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Brittany, You are right; it doesn't matter how many times we fall but how many times we rise up and try again. A nice, positive light being shed from this write to its readers. Very well done. take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


a great message,oull your self up

Posted 2 Years Ago



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