Haiku ~ Fall

Haiku ~ Fall

A Poem by Sharon L.H. Kelly

baring her shoulders

blushing leaves recline, sublime

naked beauty sleeps

                                     


                     







© 2015 Sharon L.H. Kelly



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Sharon L.H. Kelly
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Oh, I love this one! You've captured the essence of fall in so few words. This photo works well with your haiku.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review!
Artwork and words. A perfect journey into the season of Fall. Thank you Sharon for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Sharon.
this is so cool....a haiku that could be a senryu if taken as allegory....

the tree in fall losing leaves, or the woman in a freefall of love, letting go of inhibition.

so nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind review, Jacob!
Wonderful! The imagery using the photo and reading the words is nicely paired.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
beautiful and vivid imagery! well done! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Many thanks for your kind review!
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r most welcome! :)
The last line is a beautiful closing line.
Wonderfully presented.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Cherry Pepperweb

2 Years Ago

:) it's good to dance every so often.
You're welcome.
Beautiful! Amazing how so few words can sum up such a beautiful time of year

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Sarah!
This is beautiful I Imagine spring being this beautiful being from your Haiku.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Great work this. The Haiku is great, but the extra element of thought of fall was perfect. Loved it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Many thanks, Willard!
That's a real unique and appealing way of describing Autumn.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!

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Added on April 27, 2015
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Tags: Haiku, 5/7/5, Fall, Leaves, Tree

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I am a Registered Nurse and Poetess. I especially enjoy Haikus. I love reading new writers and Read Requests as time allows. Regarding friends, I have one. Please only "friend" me if we have read eac.. more..

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