That Boy

That boy sitting over there

That boy whom she likes

That boy with short, blond hair

That boy sitting over there

 

That boy who makes her laugh

That boy that seems so perfect

That boy that seems like her other half

That boy that makes her laugh

 

That boy whom she sees everyday

That boy who makes butterflies appear

That boy who she wished would come her way

That boy whom she sees everyday

 

That boy who makes her cry

That boy who makes her sad

That boy who makes her heart lie

That boy who makes her cry

Reviews

[Elliot Kyron]

This is a really good piece of writing. What I love about it is the unique repetition that you used. I've never read a poem quite like this one, which makes it special. And I think everyone has known "that boy". Thank you so much for sharing!