To Whom It May Concern

To Whom It May Concern

A Poem by Life Inside Death

 

Before you I never loved

I never cared before.

Before you I was selfish

I’m not like that anymore

 

We went our separate ways

Back then we were just friends

I faded from your sight

I had to make amends

 

And 2 years passed

We saw each other after so long

You remembered my name

But something seemed wrong

 

I gave you my honor

I’d stay through it all

I’d be there through it all

I’d be there beside you

To catch if you all

 

The words “together forever”

Took a while new meaning

After death I’ll still hold you

I’ll stop all your bleeding

 

Love is a strong word

But I’ll use it anyway

I’ll love you forever

That’s all I have to say.

© 2008 Life Inside Death


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An emotion from the depths of your heart woven into this beautiful poem.

Full of love and care.
I enjoyed it very much.

Love is a strong word

But I'll use it anyway

I'll love you forever

That's all I need to say.

-my favorite lines because they speak of dedication and commitment, the value of the word "Love" and the promise to standby that word.

Lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omg. There is alot of emotion in this poem that i can not describe. It actually made me cry. And if you don't mind me asking, who is this to if it is to someone?

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

x3! Probably my favorite so far. AHH I love this. And you. xD :]

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 17, 2008
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Life Inside Death
Life Inside Death

Cincinnati, OH



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