Hey

Hey

A Poem by Emilia Cole

Hey there 

"Umm..."

Heh...you're adorable

"T-thanks"

A-are you smiling right now?

"Uhh...y-yeah"

Well...you have a beautiful smile

"No...No I don't"

Yup...It's final you do have a beautiful smile

"Don't say that..."

Well why not?

"If I say no...then it's no"

Well I'd like to know why

"He said so..."

Who?

"Forget it!"

I'd like to know

"Why?"

So I can show them how a real man treats his girl

"What?"

You're perfect just the way you are babe

© 2017 Emilia Cole



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It just shows that some people may see one thing in one while the self may perceive something entirely different. This actually reminded of a moment when I was in school. I was (and still am) typically a loner, so at lunch I would sit alone. Then, a boy sat across from me. I thought nothing of him, though, he asked if I was scared. I reluctantly told him "no" and he explained that I carried a fearful disposition. It was odd because I don't feel legit "fear", I suppose in most cases... But, I apparently seemed afraid and that was open to others. The way we present ourselves may portray something we never knew showed. This person of who you speak of has a beautiful presence, not just a beautiful smile. Sometimes, it just takes one person to point it out and make that person realize how significant their existence is. Great job!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emilia  Cole

9 Months Ago

Yeah I've been trying to find myself in ways or relation to this but it hasn't happened yet...lmao s.. read more
Sapientiam

9 Months Ago

Well, we are all pathetic, one way or another. ^ ^



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The slip slap talk of going no where!
Cool!

regards,
al

Posted 6 Months Ago


Reminds me of myself on a good day. I'd love to be more brave, though. Truly captures the essence of an actually useful desire.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Emilia  Cole

8 Months Ago

yeah thanks
It just shows that some people may see one thing in one while the self may perceive something entirely different. This actually reminded of a moment when I was in school. I was (and still am) typically a loner, so at lunch I would sit alone. Then, a boy sat across from me. I thought nothing of him, though, he asked if I was scared. I reluctantly told him "no" and he explained that I carried a fearful disposition. It was odd because I don't feel legit "fear", I suppose in most cases... But, I apparently seemed afraid and that was open to others. The way we present ourselves may portray something we never knew showed. This person of who you speak of has a beautiful presence, not just a beautiful smile. Sometimes, it just takes one person to point it out and make that person realize how significant their existence is. Great job!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emilia  Cole

9 Months Ago

Yeah I've been trying to find myself in ways or relation to this but it hasn't happened yet...lmao s.. read more
Sapientiam

9 Months Ago

Well, we are all pathetic, one way or another. ^ ^
Such innocence in this writing, its like reading fingerprints on the hand of a new born. this is fun

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emilia  Cole

9 Months Ago

It's that moment when you realize you've got someone who cares...this has nothing to do in relation .. read more
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

9 Months Ago

I bet your amazing! :)
A brief story with a strong message Emilia Cole.
We often give weight to words of those who don't deserve it. This leads to us regarding the words of others as lesser words.
Good one.
:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Emilia Cole

Clayton,Watertown, NY



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