I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about a friend made another friend sad and asking her forgiveness.

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I’m sorry I made you sad

I didn’t mean to make you mad at me

I hope you forgive me, so we can be friends

It will make me glad to see you smile.

I wish I can take back from what I said.

I would give you gifts.

If you could give me one more chance,

I will make you happy even more.

Please forgive me!

 


© 2010 HorrorMaster



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I have to say you've done well in expanding yourself out of the horror genre, leading into an awful lot of good poetry. I like that you've kept up incorporating songs into your stories and poem (especially since it's a nice remix), as it adds it's own atmosphere to the writing. Good work once again, I look forward to seeing what comes up next.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Once again, a very good work. Definitely growing as a poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


thats sweet its not ur usuall stuff but its good

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sooooooooooo sweet!!!!!
u sure have a lighter side to yr poems Ira loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Awe soo cute. I love this poem. I like the step you took our of horror. It is a good step, but you are an awesome writer when it comes to horror. This was adorable though. I hope she forgave you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was struck me deeply, as I am prone to say things I later regret. Words can't be taken back, but forgiveness can be given. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing message..

Posted 7 Years Ago


It does seem a bit simple but the thought is very nice. Don't we all want someone out there to forgive us for something bad we did.

Keep it up

N.S.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very innocent poem, and heartfelt... simple and nice to read...

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem expresses your identity a lot. Your someone who easily can be forgiven. Maybe people just don't like to show that they forgive you but deep inside they do.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It seems too.. simple.
Put more emotion into it.
Tell what happened in concise terms.
Drag the reader in

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very poetic apology and a nicely done write!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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HorrorMaster
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Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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