Special someone

I thought love had to hurt

For it to be right

Become true friends

I cry myself to sleep

I’m just a non-perfect girl

You don't understand

I love it when I catch you looking at me

Let’s have some fresh

Yolo after all right

If Plan A doesn't work

Use the alphabet

We got a long way to go

Before anything

Don’t Cheat on Me Please

It’s not a test and I'd never do it to you

Just know sorry won’t cut.

And you’ll be out of my life in no time

If don't always Start the convo

Help me by starting it

I’ll catch on

I’m shy in the beginning

I won’t think of giving you a second Chance

So forget trying

Either way I’ll keep the misery and loneliness away

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

wow very intense,direct, yet soft and not so in your face. I like the way each line builds on the one before and still retains that self thinking feeling. very well writing

[Hamza]

it's something that i can absolutely relate to in the first place .. so i can understand the sentiment behind it ...
but the way you managed this piece ....
onw word for this --> AWESOME !!

[khalid]

it is very important to put the rules for a relation before it becomes more serious. it is more important if the two follow the rules really...
very nicely penned

[Leslie Philibert]

Another good one - and a small comment from a elderly ( and I hope) wise fellow, there are no perfect people, just people, so enjoy your talent which a lot of others don`t have...

[Tex]

I so get this being in a dark place thing...

I was writing such dark stuff for awhile I had to add thee stanzas to my piece "I'll Not Throw In The Towel (lyrics)" because it ended so dark I thought people might cut there wrists after reading it... LOL if you read that one note how it would end without the last 3 stanzas (not counting the hook at the end).

Back to your writing... I love it. it has this ... real... raw... and the emotions are deep and true.

just wonderful stuff

[Heather]

Thanks

[I am renee]

i so get where your going with this poem, i understand it completely. i love this :)

[Heather]

Thanks so much :)

[I am renee]

ur welcome :)

[quinfinn]

you really display some dark nuances of the relationship thing, i wonder have you ever been treated fairly.....anyway, that's none of my business. i would love to see something more positive and cheerful from you. this is deep, dark and real. love it.

[Heather]

Thanks
And I will write some positive stuff over the weekend.
I have been in a slighty upset mood

[Erinne S.]

I really liked this piece, but the font is very distracting and it takes away from the beauty and emotion in this piece. I would recommend changing it to something more simple. That is only a suggestion though! Overall the poem was well written

~Erinne

[Heather]

Thanks :)