The Sacrifice

The Sacrifice

A Poem by The Iron Horseman
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The Huntress returns when she is most needed, foiling the forces of darkness.

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It's summer and the darkness cooks.

It's midnight and the full moon looks

Down at the ring of stones on the forest floor,

That link this world to the Otherworld's door.


Shadows flit between the standing stones,

Bone flutes utter ululating tones,

A hooded figure wields a bright steel knife,

That it will use to take a maiden's life.


Great magics require that blood be spilled,

So that demonic appetites may be fulfilled,

The lives of innocents must be fed to the damned,

To harness powers of evil that lurk in the land.


A dazed maid is led to the altar

By a dark priest hauling on her halter.

She is laid upon the cold, hard stone,

The shadow priests begin to chant and drone.


The priest raises the glittering blade,

As the moon's light illuminates the glade.

He pauses with the blade held high,

To scream a curse into the midnight sky.


But as the dagger plunges towards the maiden's breast,

A feathered shaft slashes through his chest,

A three-foot barb fired from the night,

By a warrior woman who fights for The Light.


More shafts whip from the trees,

Dropping shadow priests down to their knees,

Before The Huntress steps into the ring,

Her last arrow nocked to her string.


The Dark Ones close in for the kill,

Underestimating the strength of her will.

She raises her bow and aims it high,

Driving her last shaft through the leader's eye.


Tossing her bow out into the dark,

She draws her sword and carves a hissing arc.

She whirls, and dances, and twists, and glides,

While her blade flickers, and stabs, and steals more lives.


The bodies pile up at her feet,

Until the forces of evil go down to defeat.

When all of the Dark Ones are bloody and dead,

The Huntress lops off the High Priest's head.


As she approaches the altar stone,

She recognizes the maiden as one of her own,

Then raises her gently to her feet,

Consoling her with words both soft and sweet.


As The Huntress takes the maiden on her way,

To find a safe place where she can stay,

She assures her that those who seek souls to purloin,

Will always be paid out in their own coin.



© 2017 The Iron Horseman



Author's Note

The Iron Horseman
Another Huntress adventure.

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I was so excited to see this installment, I could not stop smiling! Which, of course, when the Huntress is meting out justice is not exactly the reaction sought. Hooray for the heroine, so good to see her back in action.

Best part ever - lopping off the head of the priest. Serious respect.

I hope to someday meet this warrior. She's my kinda gal.

Well done, as always. Fun, exciting and a moral.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

1 Week Ago

As always, PL, thank you for your kind words. I enjoy writing Huntress adventures, she appeals to my.. read more



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I was so excited to see this installment, I could not stop smiling! Which, of course, when the Huntress is meting out justice is not exactly the reaction sought. Hooray for the heroine, so good to see her back in action.

Best part ever - lopping off the head of the priest. Serious respect.

I hope to someday meet this warrior. She's my kinda gal.

Well done, as always. Fun, exciting and a moral.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

1 Week Ago

As always, PL, thank you for your kind words. I enjoy writing Huntress adventures, she appeals to my.. read more
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Bone flutes utter ululating tones... Whoa... A stark adventure in the dark... A sacrifice saved, a maiden laid by a maiden, the wonderful bow prowess, but most importantly... The epic fight in rhyme... Bust out yeh' coins if you gonna purloin poor souls... The Huntress is here...



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The Iron Horseman

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Silente, both for the review and the group. Looking forward to some fun!
Silente

1 Week Ago

Same, and an honor
Wow! This is magnificent. The visual you have given astounds me.

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The Iron Horseman

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Beckie. I enjoy telling stories! :)
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Added on October 3, 2017
Last Updated on October 4, 2017
Tags: sacrifice, ritual, rescue, guardian, darkness, evil, witchcraft, sorcery, heroism, adventure, kindness, hope, black magic

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The Iron Horseman
The Iron Horseman

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