Night of Explosion

Night of Explosion

A Poem by J. F. Charleston
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Do you know what the Night of Explosion is?

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In the night
imagination runs wild
with unstopable insperations
everything isn't mild
but explosive!!!

Your mind screams
your soul builds beams
of greatness as you wonder
your heart rate accelerates
in the night

Adrenalin escapes
giving uncontrolable powers

all of the great
come alive in the night
turning wheels
of wonders

Muted creatures
fight in your mind
all the will you have
to create overflows

All in the night
of explosions
sequences become right

Dreams become reality
a different mortality
causing you
stick out of the few

The sweetest sight
in your eye
death no longer a fright
life doesn't make you cry

All in the
Night of Explosion.

© 2015 J. F. Charleston


Author's Note

J. F. Charleston
A thing I had to write about when I had awesome visions.
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Can I invade those visions...damn that was mind bending...Give me a minute here to get my brain functioning again...lol But really I just traveled from one to the other as I read down the piece. It built like waves (the ocean love I feel) then came right back to center for a split second when you recalled how this happens in the "Night of Explotion" ... in the night where we can imagine freely without worry of shun or being outcast. Freedom inside the night is something to be cherished...it comes along seldom. (hope that made sense) I liked it very much...thank you for your RR :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I like the flow of thoughts and the repetition gave strength to the poem.
"Adrenalin escapes
giving uncontrolable powers "
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Can I invade those visions...damn that was mind bending...Give me a minute here to get my brain functioning again...lol But really I just traveled from one to the other as I read down the piece. It built like waves (the ocean love I feel) then came right back to center for a split second when you recalled how this happens in the "Night of Explotion" ... in the night where we can imagine freely without worry of shun or being outcast. Freedom inside the night is something to be cherished...it comes along seldom. (hope that made sense) I liked it very much...thank you for your RR :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write, I can't believe your only a freshman

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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