Known

Known

A Poem by Jackie
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So many clues.... issues beyond you

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You must of known. So many clues, issues beyond you
For so long it's shown. It has always been there
you must have been aware, couldn't have been ill prepared

You must of knew. There was not much that you could do
You dealt your best. And so much time that you invest
But you knew... You must of caught clues that you...
You walked into a mess. Even if it perked your interest. 

There was no way you could of been eschew
I know you tried. All you wanted was to confide
wasn't much you could do on the other side. It's true
But you...

You must have knew. Couldn't have been blind
There were so many clues. In plain view 
Shouldn't have been hard to find
Did it ever cross your mind
even if you missed the signs
When your heart was on the line 
Did you ever wonder why 

before it all ensued
Was there enough to conclude
Did curiosity ever intrude

Before during or after
The good times, the laughter
Did you see signs of disaster
You must of known 
So many clues, issues beyond you
For so long it's shown.

You must of knew, noticed clues. 
Or did you lose focus. 
Only so much that you do. You did your best. 
Even if it turned out to be a mess. Never showed interest
You remained true but you... 

You must of knew was in plain view. 
It was always there, you must of been aware... 
Couldn't Have been ill prepared. Or maybe it was transparent. 
Did you look right through? And what you felt. It was so true
It was so real. All you knew was what you feel

Oct 29th, November 1st, 2017
Jackie Gunnin

© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
was about my dad and his previous relationship with a troubled mother and her daughter
No hard feelings. just curiosity, concern and troubled thoughts

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sometimes we just don1t care

Posted 6 Years Ago


*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

You must have... Did I... Could not have missed the clues... A smartly rhyming poem that concludes with absolute truth... All we know is what we feel...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you must of knew, great line and thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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