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turning over leafs

to throwing darts to the sea

I was once alive

as a misguided bumble bee

puppy dog tails

patching up sail boat sails

I was once a lie

hurting like hail

Author's Note

i never finish this but i like it this way more

Reviews

[Reika]

mewithoutyou-ish
mmhmmm

your words,
your lines,
are like drops of water
dropping
into water
and just as the last word
is read
the last drop
is dropped
and a ripple is born
echoing through fluid matter.

It's short
and ADORABLE. heehee :)
it really does sound like
it echoes at the end.
Like, I hear someone rapping it in my head.
And the hail ends up echoing
after all the instruments stop.