Pa!n.

surrounded by pain,

your pain.

my pain,

your brothers pain.

my mothers pain.

it's enough to send me insane.

is it too much to handle?

how long will it take for me to break and fall.

it will be too late,

because pain waits for no one.

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

wow this is interesting, it rings in my mind:
"because pain waits for no one."

[Coyote Poetry]

Pain can come from many directions. Wisdom teaches us to forget the bad things and leave them behind. Learn from mistakes and move on. Swimming in pain don't assist you or anyone else. A excellent poem. Made me think this night.
Coyote

[Angelic Surrender]

True. very powerful.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I often feel like this a lot, my friends tell me their pain, i hear my parents pain, i know my own pain... isn't it enough pain to have yours alone. Very nice write, the emotion in this is a lot, love the last line. Nice simple title.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

pain waits for no one? That's an interesting concept, I hope to read more from you, oh and Nikki.

[deadlysilence]

the emotion threw this poem is phenomenal the intensity of it just makes you want to read it more great job

[hmm]

This is so true, Nicely done.
I agree very intense write.
nice write

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow .. I feel the intense emotion here .. Sometimes we feel surrounded ... And then the sun rises .. And a new day brings hope, and answers .. Don't give up .. there is always time .. to find joy ....

Hang on young one ... Jasmine