Unrequited...

Unrequited...

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
"

The purest form of love

"

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

© 2017 Anindita Janhabee



Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

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I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

Posted 9 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anindita Janhabee

9 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never ful.. read more



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"Sometimes it's okay to be like a river ", nice poem, and surely I felt the emotions within these words. Wonderful poem

Posted 2 Months Ago


very nice ,
each and every words passed through my life ,

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Months Ago


You it the nail on the head with the use of the word bittersweet Ani. Beautifully crafted piece that we can all find pieces of ourselves in.

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job!! :)) I loved this poem!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Beautifully expressed thoughts.

Posted 8 Months Ago


wow..
a completely blown away feel..
i read this twice, drenched in love and emotions
god bless the writer

Posted 8 Months Ago


Nicely written emotions. Good one.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Beautifully expressed Unrequited Love...
I liked it a lot...Simple pieces sometimes touch the heart and it is one of them.
Good work :-)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Months Ago

Thanks dear for your visit...
much appreciated...
I deeply felt the emotions behind your write, these characters attracted me, I want to know about you writer, Anindita Janhabee..
Beautiful write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Months Ago

Thanks a lot dear... great honour ... haha... thanks a lot ...
It's a very sweet and beautiful piece
Perfect description of love my friend...
thank u jannu for sharing such a amazing poetry of love.......

Posted 9 Months Ago


Anindita Janhabee

9 Months Ago

Oh Mannu... glad to see ur review.... thank u....

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Jeypore, Odisha, India



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