In love

In love

A Poem by JanieB

In love

 

Tears of joy

Running down my face

Seeing you lying there

The love of my life.

 

You make me so happy

With your cheeky smile

Your tender kisses

Caressing me.

 

The longing for your body

Next to mine

Holding me close

Oh how I love you.

 

I look deep into your eyes

I see such beauty

Such intense warmth envelopes me

Wrapping me up in what I call love.

© 2010 JanieB


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Gets to the point, beautifully written. I like this alot. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this makes me feel all warm inside =)
This poem really seems to appreciate the little things in a relationship that can be so wonderful. Good job. This really makes me miss my boyfriend though =(
why do half of your poems make me miss stuff? lol


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a nice sentiment, a joyous love poemm sweet and lightly enrapturing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice I like things short to the point

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 22, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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