Falling freely

Falling freely

A Poem by Jas
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About my love

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Standing firm on the ground
In a flash, a blink of an eye
I'm free falling
I heard your name, like music to me
I saw your face, like a beautiful painting

Then I took a leap
I gazed into your grey-blue eyes
I began to fall, hard and fast
You grabbed my hand and I was powerless against you
You kissed my skin and I was gone

I'm free falling with you at my side
Everyday you drag me into the depths of your eyes
You pull me close to your body and my heart melts
Your logical mind never fails to amaze me
Your soul is so beautiful to me
Free falling in love with you
Everyday and it's just the beginning

© 2018 Jas


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'Falling freely
Jas,
Wonderful and spontaneous description of deep feelings. Lovely words for a lovely experience.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Leo
very romantic and sizzling..I enjoyed reading it while visualizing my ex gf..

a woman gives a deserving man her trust and he can either embrace it and rise or abuse it and capsize..check out angelic girl or dada for my version of romancing women :))

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Jas
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