Born Before the Sun

We were born before the Sun

The Heavenly wind

Brought us to our Earthly realm

The seas poured from the sky

As we were brought down

The wind carried our souls

To our bodies

Where we were destined for one

Our souls belong together

Born before the wind

Carried by God's breath

We are meant to be

My dreams show me our future

Bright and happy as one

Splitting into several

As one still

The seasons change

As we grow older

Leaves fall from the trees

Grass grows again

Yet we still stand

Time will age us

Our souls will always

Keep us together

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

This poem is beautifully written. I enjoyed the personal imagery it brought to my mind. Well done!

[Khaaki]

How deep and beautifully said... Loved it!

[Emily B]

this is tall and lovely :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Lovely poem you wrote that leaves your reader something to ponder on about their life! Soild Write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong statements and story in this poem. Life will move on. We will get older. If a person does nothing for someone. I believe he will be like dust in the wind. If he stand tall and care for the people around them. His soul will find peace in memory and in life. A excellent poem. You made me think. The goal of a good writer.
Coyote

[Norma M Sutton]

This is beautiful.

[Sunni Davis]

Beautifully written with powerful images. Its deep and soulful. Great job!