Broken phase

How do you see me? am I just a stranger
Do you even feel me? can't take this any longer

You said that you loved me, I gave you my all
I built my world around you, now you're my downfall

What you did to me, I'll remember for all eternity
I'm trapped in myself, will somebody come rescue me?

I wanna scream, I wanna fly away
But my wings have been broken, now I'm stuck here all day
Everywhere I turn, it's just empty space
I'm alone on this island.....For the broken phase.

How do you see me? Am now just a stranger
I know you don't feel me, can't stay here any longer

I hope that you're happy, where ever you may be
Cause right from the starting, you never had love for me

I hope he makes you smile, hope he knows you love to dance
He never makes you cry, and buys you flowers when he has the chance

I wanna scream, I wanna fly away
But my wings are broken, I'm stuck here all day
Everywhere I turn, it's just empty space
Am alone on this island...I have to break this phase.

Reviews

[Aria Cardona]

"But my wings are broken, I'm stuck here all day"
Maybe try 'But my wings have been broken, now i'm stuck here all day"?
And 'I'm alone on this island....... For the broken phase of my life'? But I think that it's really good the way it is otherwise. Just make sure to use capital letters.

[Jerryyoung1z]

Thanks, I'll borrow some of your advice.

[Aria Cardona]

No problem hun :D