Darkness

This is just a small poem I did while bored. It has a message but I’ll let you find it.

Don’t feel pain
Don’t feel sadness
Don’t refrain
Don’t succumb to darkness

Feel happiness
Feel outstanding
You are amazing
You are our happiness

Don’t feel hopeless
We are endless
We are Fearless
Unlike the darkness

You are shining
Like a ray of light
And I know you’ll do what’s right
Not succumbing to darkness

Author's Note

Feedback appreciated.

Reviews

[UNDRSTND M 156]

I was really sad and this kinda made me feel better

[Angie G]

Don't succumb to darkness for death isn't always the answer when you have not seen the beauty life has to offer. Nice piece.

[cooncomemasi]

I like your style, friend. The message is right up my alley, looking at the glass half full is where its at. Good job, keep em coming Jose.