My burning heart

I wrote this poem when i hesitated about life, when things just confused me and i didn't know what to do. I wrote down my feelings as i always do, it's a way of expressing my inner being and releasing the problem onto paper, and out of my life.

Oh how will it end,

like a Shakespeare tragedy?

So far and so distant,

yet still i desire thee.

 

Like Romeo i come,

and climb to the balcony.

To hear thou sweet voice,

as thy cry out to me.

 

Am I just a fool,

to have ever thought so?

Or might this Love we had,

ever go on to grow.

 

I thought it was lost,

I thought i let go.

But deep down in my heart,

I still feel that glow.

 

Small it might be,

it still is a flame.

I fear my dear Love,

it will never go tame.

 

As the days pass by,

the flame becomes a fire,

My heart is now burning,

I crave my soul desire.

 

My mind is now lost,

I am sorry my dear.

I coudln't help writing,

what now stands here.

Author's Note

It's not supposed to be ellegent, it's a personel poem of my own feelings. Most of my poems are like this....

Reviews

[Annique le Roux]

i love it...its a bit different to the style of the rest of your poetry and that makes it great...and to attempt the whole 'thou' thing is a huge risk but i think you managed it very well ...well done, i enjoyed this :)

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

see what i mean? all your poems dont have that repetion for a 15 year old you have a very good vocabulary... and its like your poems just come from what your feeling and i can feel that too when i read it i kind of picture it all in my head like a story or something. im sorry if that is confusing, i really am.

[Servant Ties]

I loved it no matter the spelling errors that it had (one) it showed that you are human and that not everyone is perfect and the emotion was awesome very nice done

[Ebs]

Really love it. Thought it had some good raw emotion in it and i thought it was very honest. One line i have a problem with though:
I fear my dear Love,
it will never got tame.

Got tame? or is it go tame?

good write

Ebs