The Wind

a little short and sweet love scribble

          photograph by Aleksey Marina

 

 

       He is the wind

 

                           The warmth rising deep within

                                              stirring my soul

 

                        branches sway

                                          leaves rustle

                                                         butterflies flutter

 

                        flowers invade my heart

 

                              blooming

                                           in the sweetest whispers

 

           I am a poem dancing only for him

 

                                 Yes,

                                        he is the wind

 

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! You know, wind is once my muse in my poetry...so this one got my attention from your page.

You have made a different take on the wind here. It embraces you...makes you dance...and makes everything around you beautiful. Truly that when you love someone, everything becomes beautiful.

Wonderful piece. I like the structure and the word flow.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a lovely evening :) Julie

[Tom]

That old wind gets everywhere !

[MsJewel]

LOL! It sure does! :) Julie

[Neon]

Yeh, i can see in the pic, how much he's blowing you ... lol I enjoyed the poem. Very nice theme.

[MsJewel]

LOL! Thanks for the great comment! :) Julie

[Trace]

I would love to spend a day in your world where love poems flow so easily from your pen. This is incredible, and your choice of art compliments it perfectly. Trace

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Trace. You are welcome in my world anytime my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic words. The imagery of nature is so effective in this one, Julie. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi! Hugs, Julie

[yuta]

That is a very beautiful poem. You never seem to amaze me with your writing. You really have a gift, keep writing

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

are we in love wind,flowers romantic

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Ron! :) Julie

[adreamer]

Once again you have shown of all us how soft very beautiful you're poetry can be, it come from a very loving heart you have within you Julie. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Larry. I hope all is well with you. Hugs, Julie

[TL Boehm]

I am a poem dancing only for him. Exquisite Write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Wow, what man would not want such a piece written for him? I love the dancing poem image. Gorgeous piece :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my very sweet friend! :) Julie