Winter

Winter

A Poem by MsJewel
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a romantic fantasy

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art ~ winter goddess by Charlene maguire

 

 

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Gather cool winds around her

and shake her silken hair

weaving the beams of moonlight

and he shall feel her there

 

Falling in mists and shadows

haunting the darkest night

twirling with grace she whispers

melodies soft and light

 

Filling the sky above him

with pale white innocence

and he can feel her spirit

drifting with elegance

 

Drawing him in the blanket

that sweeps her ivory bed

wrapping his heart in splendor

into her dreams he’s led

 

“Dance my love, just snowflakes

in this white wonderland

Float with me on fantasies

come love, take my hand”

 

Dressing his eyes with beauty

 shimmers of diamond glow

crown her head with lilies

yet in the night below…

 

The roses chill and wither

at her touch, icy cold

If he could make just one wish

If he could be so bold

 

To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime 

and still....to feel her there

~~~


© 2014 MsJewel



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To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime

and still....to feel her there

lovely lines. ! hugs !
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Anand. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs, Julie



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dear Julie... We live in a snowy mist...
dreaming of Spring and the touch of
love's awakening... Your poetry conveys
the chill of Winter and the hope of Spring.
truly... Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Time moves so fast, it is kind of a shame to wish for it to move even faster..but I can't help wishi.. read more
To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime

and still....to feel her there

lovely lines. ! hugs !
**********************************************************************************************************************************************

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Anand. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs, Julie
This one was really cool! No pun intended!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
I have just little word to say... beautiful poetry and beautiful write by beautiful person.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you. :) Julie
I could feel and see this winters night you write of. Exceptional!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one - it is one of my favorites. H.. read more
A classic. Truly. This is crafted in the age of Byron and tells tales far sweeter. Wow... I'm stuck here smiling. A beautiful portrait you paint of passion and love... dreams and need. Longing for the moment to continue. Simply exquisite. I loved it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie
Clever rimes and very moving

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
Banana split !

4 Years Ago

your welcome
Your words are so vivid julie i almost feel the chill.Beautifully written as usual :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

4 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
This is a brillian piece, eacho line carries so easily from the last. Amazing description as well, loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry :) Julie
This poem draws the picture of an epic romance. The allegory of the winter goddess is a stunning figure that only serves to empower the thoughts you chose to channel through your writing. A beautiful write with an emotional message.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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