The Pity You Give

The Pity You Give

A Poem by JustNonsenseAndSugar

The pity you give me
makes me sick to my stomach.
You stare and wonder
how I can get though the day.
I go past you every day
and you watch as I limp by.
I flail and drop my papers 
and you don't help,
You just pity
because you don't understand.
You tell me to stop tipping my head
because it annoys you.
I can't help it.

© 2018 JustNonsenseAndSugar


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Your poems are honestly raw. Reader can feel emotions and feel empathy for your struggle. Sometimes people can misunderstood our nature. Sometimes they can think we are stronger but we are not. Sometimes we need jast talk to someone to feel we are not alone. To have feels of unity in someone. We can get easily hurt but healing is not easy . It's take lot of bravery and courage. I hope soon things in your life get better.

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Your poems are honestly raw. Reader can feel emotions and feel empathy for your struggle. Sometimes people can misunderstood our nature. Sometimes they can think we are stronger but we are not. Sometimes we need jast talk to someone to feel we are not alone. To have feels of unity in someone. We can get easily hurt but healing is not easy . It's take lot of bravery and courage. I hope soon things in your life get better.

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Somewhere, MI



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I lack understanding of others so it is difficult for me to comment on your writing. If you ask me to specifically, I will try to do my best however. I will try to comment on writing but I normally av.. more..

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