LOOK DEEP

LOOK DEEP

A Poem by Justin
"

look deep inside someone before you judge them because u dont know what they have been through

"
look really
deep
what you see in the
outside is totally
different from
what is in the 
inside
what is on the 
outside may
be a way to 
cover what is inside
inside the pain
the hurt
the frustration
angry
sadness
hate
taken advantage
of from
people who
thought could be 
trusted
but they lied
and who avoided
never gave a
reason
continue to look
deep 
because the inside
is way more important
then the outside



© 2018 Justin



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So accurate, everyone has a person inside and show another one outside, some because are afraid, or doesn't want to show their true feelings.. but I guess humans are like that... I guess if it was that easy to know what is really inside a person life would be way more different, but not interesting... I loved it :) good work

Posted 8 Months Ago


You are right Justin. Outside face is rarely the true face. I did like the honest words and thoughts. In this world. Few people show real face. Thank you Justin for sharing the amazing words and thoughts. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Thank you for this beautiful poem. 10/10! It is really important to remember to look deep and past the surface. And once you reach the deep it is also important to keep looking deep otherwise you find danger in resurfacing. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Jas
This resonates with me personally, I'm continually judged by my peers. And it's quite interesting to see their reactions when they find how I am inside and realize I am the way I am for a reason

Posted 10 Months Ago


This leaves so much to imagine, so much to wonder about who hurt, who was hurt, and all of the hurt and pain and sadness was so evident. You have done amazingly well.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Yes I agree, no one sees ones real self but what they see on the outside but the truth is really inside. Good job 🤗

Posted 10 Months Ago


Justin

10 Months Ago

Thanks Nancy 😉😉
STORIES BEHIND EYES

10 Months Ago

You welcome
Justin

10 Months Ago

I am glad u enjoy the new writing that I have posted in this new account
the way you describe pain is somewhat unique. this poem motivates me to accept pain as what it is

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Justin

10 Months Ago

Thanks 😃😃😃
This was amazing! You wrote something that is so true to life. The outside can be control, letting people see only what you want them to see, while the inside is wild, uncontrolled, and completely you.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Amy
Very good poem and definetly the trith!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Justin

10 Months Ago

Thanks Amy!!! :)
This is so on point of what is a common human experience, and you did a great job depicting it. External expressions are controlled, but internal existence is what is authentic and real. What could be more valuable than your true self. Beautiful.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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