Bridge after Coma

Bridge after Coma

A Poem by KeeD
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Got this idea after reading Muse's poem "Walking Across Water"

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I don't feel awake
The first step
It's the hardest
I am incapable of moving past it

Will you take me across
Disillusioned by decisions 
Fragile, I've broken myself 
Carrying my own cross

Hold my hand
I'm shaky and my legs give in
Understand, I'm not ready 
There's too much hurt within

Halfway there
I feel your strength run through me
The cloak of your embrace
I can taste serendipity in the air 

Is God aware
I'm drowning in my own despair 
Held tight by a mother's hold
Feels so warm yet she's so cold

Stay with me still
Only memories are here to stay
Was a time when you said you'd never go away
Then why am I alone

Mama
This is the bridge that's going to take us home
Why am I afraid that you're going to go alone
Another sleepless night 

Can you hear my cries 
Calling out your name
Building bridges just to numb the pain
I never want to forget your face

Is this my fate
To live on without you 
It was my fault 
he took you away

I'm not too late
Mama, I'm taking the bridge to you now
I'll see you as soon as all my blood pours out 
We'll be together, happy again



   Don't text and drive my friends




© 2017 KeeD



Author's Note

KeeD
A car crash .. one life lost .. a son's journey to find his mother again and ask for her forgiveness

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"Hold my hand?
I'm shaky and my legs give in
Understand I'm not ready
There's to much hurt within"

That one's my favorite. It's so versatile, and seems like something I would write.
The picture is really beautiful and seem endless.
Good job Kee. It was very well written. :3

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you Amanda :3 It does seem endless now that I look at it :D



Reviews

Mothers are our angels on earth and in heaven. We cry out her name in hope or despair. One owes a mother so much, most of all the will to preserve ourself, body and soul, something for which a mother intercedes forever with God. A powerful write with beautifully crafted verses. Your words speak straight to the soul, Keegan.

Posted 1 Month Ago


TO SAY THIS PIECE is stirring, amazing, enlightening, poignant...is just words....but words are the only vehicle to convey the true definition of emotion rendered from the reading. Tragedy ensues when warnings go unheeded, leaving us bereft in the aftermath of sorrow. You have captured the longing, indelibly...
Masqued^^

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh! This is so touching....
You will make people weep by your writing.


Posted 4 Years Ago


A strong write. Excellent moving quality to it, a sadness within and a caring, cool pen upon this, nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Indeed no distractions such as to text when driving. The outcome is terrible to see accidents caused by this. Your poem here is very touching. Lovely music in your Author's Note as well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


So sad...and yet there is an uplifting sense about this as well. I find the fragility of this one quite mesmerizing. There really isn't a lot that I can say about this one, as I found it quite sublime and "lulling" to my current mood. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh God! m crying..cant believe this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh my Oh My i am left speachless!!! You are so amazing!!!!!!!! LOVELY JOB!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh my heart hearts after reading this what strength is shown in this write♡

Posted 4 Years Ago



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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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