Bonfires

Bonfires

A Poem by KeeD
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(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

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Bonfires

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 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 


© 2013 KeeD



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I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

let me know if this works :3
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Yes!!



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my love and i have not gotten to sit beside a bonfire yet, but that is one of the many romantic pleasures to share in future.

thank you for sharing this poem with us.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

not as easy as it sounds...we live 4 states away from each other...so our time together is always li.. read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

Aww I'm sorry if I was a magical Indian boy i'd grant your wish as we speak.. But I do give you all .. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

thanks.
awwwww........... :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love bonfires! :3 My friends and I always joke about getting pushed in. >.< We're just crazy. Haha

Your poems are getting better, bubby. This one was romantic and beautiful :3
Amazing. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow, I'm speechless. This was just...amazing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

let me know if this works :3
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Yes!!

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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