Hells' Wrath

Hells' Wrath

A Poem by KateH038
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I wrote this at a time when I was in an abusive relationship....

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There's a proper time for pointing a finger, as well as for placing the blame. Feelings now spewing beyond the surface, due to fulfillment of promises that never came.
You dismissed your word to change, to love and always give. Instead it's been replaced with spite and our love now ceases to live.
Muscles tensing, uncontrollable shaking, my heart begins to race. I hear voices speaking to me loudly, delivering warning to firmly brace.
Hells' wrath approaching fiercely, slinging viscious tide. I've no place to safely escape, not even a corner to hide.
Anger released in violence, intensity beyond profound. My eyes are tightly shut and I make not a single sound.
Hell hath arrived earlier, than my misjudged guess at first- a bead of sweat from above falls onto my face, as I prepare myself for the worst....

© 2017 KateH038



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I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend, you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

Posted 2 Months Ago


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KateH038

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much for reading my poem and thank you more for leaving such a sweet comment! I to.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome! And yes I would feel free to read your some more of your writings also!
KateH038

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I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend, you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KateH038

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much for reading my poem and thank you more for leaving such a sweet comment! I to.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome! And yes I would feel free to read your some more of your writings also!
KateH038

2 Months Ago

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Violently prepared

Great Read

Matthew

So I am about to tackle this subject matter myself. I, however, am neither an abuser nor been abused. I have this method where I place myself in these situations...no I wont be in my house beating the hell out of myself but I will play the imagery in my own head over and over to simulate what the emotions and feeling will be. Its complicated, a bit maniacal, yet accurate. Thus far anyway, but its always great to have references perhaps even research we'll call it. So thank you for writing such a personal piece. I do hope I come somewhere close to imitating this raw emotional charge.

Always,

Matthew

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KateH038

6 Months Ago

Very descriptive and accurate, yes.....you pretty much hit the nail on the head, fellow writer. I'm .. read more
Matthew Kult

6 Months Ago

You are most welcome. An please, call me Matthew or any of three names I use.

Always.. read more
KateH038

6 Months Ago

I sure will, Matthew and again, thank you so very much!

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