The Abused(the dust and the future)

The Abused(the dust and the future)

A Poem by poddar kushal

The abused (the dust and the future)

The upturned walls of his mind throbs.

Each flash cuts and pastes scene from past.

Small palms grasp bed sheet, new and crisp.

Eyes water too much to see the

New paint they have cared to put on

And the jovial four walls smile.

The new home and new bed he feels,

Though the dreams run back through a dark

Allay and smells of drinks rise.

He escapes the fist of a s**t

Called life, the reflection of moon,

Pale and coughing on the water.

The mind throbs and the night breaks sweat.

The slim light under the room-door

Assures a new world, adopted.

He cries for the future and past…

 

© 2008 poddar kushal


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How haunting - 'the fist of a s**t called life' is quite miraculous and daunting. Powerful work in so few words. Thank you for sharing this with me...I feel as if we should wrap him in our arms and carry him home to safety. Such longing and desire to escape whatever plagues him so in his new abode.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice work, short and to the point!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nicely done. I'd say this is another great write from you. Excellent work.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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poddar kushal
poddar kushal

kolkata, India, India



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life and trying to earn bread made me an advocate. mad at my own stressful self, turned to writing. poems mainly. but, there are several short stories published in my mother toungue 'bengali'.i live i.. more..

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