The Shining Blue and White

The shining blue and white

White enters inside,

the psyche is being blurred,

a tree’s chalky smile…

 

Winter, I am here now,

mist roams midst my mind

shining blue is worn by sky.

 

The eyes follow truths

reach a garden. Lost Eden. 

A white unicorn hops

 

over my nervous system.

Is it love I see

in the shadows around me?

 

Migratory birds

flying over the blue lake.

My hands touch hers.

            © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sorry it took me so long to review this, I love the imagery in this work. Very beautiful write.

[alternative_be]

Winter can have a somewhat misty or frozen effect on your mind...
Clearly yours is not ...
This poem is romantic in a mystical way.
Thank you for waking up my brain!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"Is it love I see
in the shadows around me?" - Oh! This is beautiful and I simply loved the metaphor in this line.
Great piece of writing :)