Survival of the Hottest

Survival of the Hottest

A Book by LaLaLuna
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Mandy and Mindy are starting high school and together, they'll climb the high school food pyramid together. Let the survival of the hottest begin!

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© 2010 LaLaLuna



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LaLaLuna
Tell me what you think of it so far, I'd love to read your reviews. And if there are any grammar problems or spelling mistakes, please tell me. I want to make this novel the best writing I can! And please stay tuned in for the next chapters and soon the newest installation to the series.

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It is very good so far! Your style of writing is very unique, I like it very much! However, sometimes I get quite confused with the perspective of the characters, I suppose I will get used to it when I sink deeper into your story! You have just a few grammatical errors, for example: Mandy squirt a good amount of shampoo into her hand, it should be: Mandy squirted a good amount. Just a simple typing error. Also, sometimes you refer to The Ashleys as The Ashley's, with an apostrophe. And that would be possesive. Again, and easy mistake. This is a very humorous story mixed in with the troubling years of high school. I really hope some good twists come to make this story as unique as your writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2010
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Tags: high school, freshmen, bullies, jocks, hotties, cheerleaders, BFFs, boys, comedy, survival

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LaLaLuna
LaLaLuna

San Francisco, CA



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I'm twelve years old and I love to write and read. I'm especially fond of horror and romance stories. I want to be an author, model, artist, photographer, designer, and teacher when I grow up. I love .. more..

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