Thank you for loveing me <3 (lyrics to a song I made)

<3

I wake up in the morning,
And you're the first thing I see.
You give me a kiss, and I'm thinking that this,
Is what I want love to be.
Hold my hand and we'll stroll through life,
Give me a ring, and I'll be your wife.
Baby, you know I would.
Well, I... hope... this doesn't fall apart.
Please don't break my heart.
Well, I... know... that I love you, so...
I'll give you faith, and see how it goes.
***
I just want to thank you...
For holding my hand,
And givin' a damn.
And I... want to thank you,
For lifting my heart up,
And being a part of,
Me...
You're my favorite thing...
When you're around, I can see...
That I should thank you, thank you, thank you...
For loving me.
***
Where would I be if you weren't by my side?
Somewhere dark and deep, always tryin' to hide.
But love,
Isn't something to be afraid of.
It's just a part of a plan...
That God made to keep our heads,
Above the sinking sand!
***
And I just want to thank you...
For holding my hand,
And givin' a damn.
And I... want to thank you,
For keeping my heart up,
And being a part of,
Me...
You're my favorite thing...
When you're around, I can see...
That I should thank you, thank you, thank you...
For loving me.
***
You gave me roses, and I gave you the key.
You unlocked the very best part of me.
You were my perfect match, my other puzzle piece.
Now I should thank you for your love and your love to be...
Thank you...
***
Thank you for holding my hand,
And thank you for being my man,
And givin' a damn...
When I was goin' under sinking sand...
And thank you for keeping my heart up,
And being a part of,
Us...
You're my favorite thing,
And all the things you bring,
I should thank you... thank you...
For loving me!
***
For loving me...
Yeah.
For loving me...
(Thank you, thank you, thank)
For loving me!

Author's Note

Tell Meg what u think

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

Oh man i actually really liked this. your lyrics had a certain flow to them, and even if i didn't know the rythem, they left enough room for me to make my own. Speaking of the lyrics, they were truly beautiful. I especially loved this line:

"Hold my hand and we'll stroll through life,
Give me a ring, and I'll be your wife."

It was a great pairing of words, that worked well with each other, perfectly illustrating what the nararrator is saying. They are willing to love as long as the other person is as well :) Great job!!! Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[write4life]

I love this piece of art! Not only does it put into perspective how you must feel, it enables myself as well as many others I'm sure to see a side of life that we haven't seen in a while: there are some people that will hold your hand and then there are people who will hold your heart! Thanks for sharing this art!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great tune, well done.

[Cherry Blossom]

this is so sweet it looks like a song to me very nice

[Denni]

i cant pick a tune :( it keeps going from evanescence to its a small world, to rock a by baby and on to many other songs! but i love the lyrics! my favorite were the first two stanzas!

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Lovely, sweet lyrics. :)
I can actually picture this as a song.. :)
Nice! :D XD :) ^^

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Hehe, well expressed there mate......Actually most of us will or had found the right one in their life and most of the time we want to express our feelings to that one person but ya know what? words can hardly describe how much that one meant to us...so beautiful...I love it...*wink*

[loowzerX]

got a musical feeling :)

[David W Moore III]

Very sweet and heartfelt. I'm going with this is a ballad, not thrash! I like it. Did you sing it to your bf?