Rain

Rain

A Poem by J.K.P.
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Another poem in a form I forgot the name of, written in my more naive years.

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Dark clouds

Carry sadness

Looming with much despair

All will be washed away and cleansed

By rain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 J.K.P.


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Creative, Coloful, and Fun!! I love the rain; Great depiction!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good piece:)
Its very calming
nice imagery!
-Heather:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you could add to this...dark clouds also have silver linings, rain brings rainbows as well as washing away and cleasing...nice imagry, I like it!

(I love to get caught in the rain so I am defending it now...LOL)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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