Proverb� #1

 

 

 

A distinctive cry proclaims ‘with-in’

Infusing what is known or provokes immorality.

 

  

© 2007 Legacy

Reviews

[Robert Pearson]

Very nice...I like the mysteriousness of it, yet I feel I exactly know what is meant.

[Ashes of Apathy]

I may of made the mistake of having read Proverb #2 first. Now that I read this piece i have a better understanding of the point that you are attempting to convey. Again, your use of few word exemplfies the idea that less is often more.
-jr

[Bayside]

So many ideas in two lines, very skillful. I am working on interpreting it. As best as any can another's work. Did you mean to have the bullet like square there? I'm sure you did, and I enjoy it very much.

[Lola Nation]

what does this mean?

[Emily B]

wow! Strikes to the very core.

[Damien Dsoul]

Abstract and at the same time, infused qualities of the likes of metaphysical poetry.

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I absolutely get this one! Crying within letting all of the emotions steep keeping them alive in some way which would provoke a false sense of immortality.. I so love the way every reader is moved in one direction or another! That is the fantastic wonder of writing!!! Take care~~~

[Tai Chi Italy]

An accurate analysis in my opinion Legacy. Mmmmmm contemplative Tai