Thought of the Unborn

Something I wrote while trying to place myself in the position of the fetus about to be aborted.

Thought of the Unborn

 

If you

Deny!

Me life,

I shall

Deny!

You love.

 

Legion

(circa 1985)

Reviews

[Dani California]

You are going to cause me to spill forth my thoughts on this subject Legion --
and I am trying hard to keep them contained.
Ah geeez --
I see my pen stirring around in the corners of my mind --

I still haven't figured out at what point we earned the right to deny life.
Did I miss something?

Another great piece my friend.
Short but packs the necessary punch!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Brilliant bit of wisdom!

[Cool Handless Luke]

Short and sweet and straight to the point - I love it! You read it in just a few seconds but the sting of the words linger in the heart long after.

[LSS]

Legion,
Thank you for one of the most potent poems, thundered as quick and loudly as the strike of lightning. But alas for too many there is only the stain on the eyeballs and not the memory of the strike. Thanks
Lar

[Tabitha Dings]

That should be.. not to cheapen it at all, should be on a bumper sticker. Simply because it needs to be seen by everyone. I definitely like it.

[Fran Marie]

A deep subject to be sure when a life is denied

so is the love therein~THanks for sharing~Fran