With you Forever

My darling, why do you have to feel this way?

I know depression has caused these thoughts.

You don't deserve any of this. 

You're too perfect to hurt like you do.

I understand what you're going through.

I used to feel this way myself.

That is, until the day I met you.

All those thoughts disappeared.

I wish I could make it better.

I wish I could take all the pain away.

I would take it upon myself, a thousand times worse,

if it meant you'd be free of the pain.

Darling, I don't know what I'd do without you.

You have made me feel free from depression.

If you go...I wouldn't be able to live.

You mean the universe to me.

You say you want to die.

That you'd be better when you're with God.

I know the way you feel.

I have had the exact same thoughts.

We've promised each other a life together.

A wonderful life filled with happiness.

If you go... what will become of it?

You're my true love.

I only wish I could be with you.

To hold your hand.

To hold you close to me.

To whisper in your ear that I love you.

One day I will be able to.

I can't, though, if you're gone.

Life is hard, but life is meant to be lived with others.

Meant to be lived with people you love.

We will get through this tough time.

One small step at a time.

I'll never leave your side.

Together, we will get through this.

Happiness will be returned to your loving heart.

Beautiful thoughts will fill your smart brain.

Depression and his sadness will be pushed away.

We will do this together, side be side.

Words cannot express how much I love you.

My love is deeper than the ocean.

It stretches farther than the ever-expanding universe. 

My love is unending.

I know you can't help having these thoughts.

My only hope is that I will be able to soften their effect on you.

My darling, I'll never leave you.

I will stand by your side forever.

<3

Reviews

[Patricia Williams]

Awww... This is so sweet. :). Wonderfully written. I have this weird thing for non rhyming poetry right now, so I kind of love everything about it. Really.
I loved the little heart at the bottom too ^_^

My two favorite stanzas:
"I only wish I could be with you.
To hold your hand.
To hold you close to me.
To whisper in your ear that I love you.

"One day I will be able to.
I can't, though, if you're gone.
Life is hard, but life is meant to be lived with others.
Meant to be lived with people you love."
BRILLIANT! :D

[Legolas]

Thank you! Your comments mean a lot to me!:)

Just to clarify, I do not have a girlfriend. I did when I wrote it, an online one if that even counts.

Thanks again!

[Patricia Williams]

You're welcome ^_^

[AK]

Wow! This is just awesome! So genuine, so selfless-simply brilliant. All your writings are so powerful, yet so simple and straight from the heart. I loved it, keep writing!

[Legolas]

Thank you so much. i don't even know why I still have this up here. The person I wrote this for is...gone....

[AK]

People might go, but memories will live on. Don't regret having it up here:)

[Legolas]

True. Ok.

[AK]

:)

[Eve]

Such a beautiful poem, the last two lines are the words most women would die to hear, so lovely these thoughts, well written flowing with love and devotions.

[Legolas]

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.

[Falling Leaf.]

She is a very special girl to have a piece such as this dedicated to her. I simply loved it; I thought of my sweetheart and smiled. Thank you for sharing.

[Legolas]

Thank you very much.

[Alana McGuire]

I love the emotion you poured into this. It's evident how much you care about her and her well being, and you express it well. If this is based off of real life emotions, I hope that you and your poem subject are doing better and living happily. :)

[Tai Ryens]

Have you stolen my life and placed it into a poem?!
Only kidding, haha.
Beautiful piece, very expressive (so good at expressing in fact that it opened up some old emotions and brought them out), and I enjoyed it. Good job.

[Alm]

Maia (I read your profile ;P) is a very lucky girl to have you. Make sure to stand by her, and always stay strong together!

-Alm

[Becky]

Beautiful. I mean, all your writing is wonderful, but this one surpassed them all, in my opinion. Such raw, powerful emotion. I can't even think of a good enough adjective to describe it. Astounding. Magnificent. (Okay, maybe not magnificent, that word is exclusively used to describe horses and marching bands.) But wonderful job nonetheless.

[That_Girl]

This is a beautiful poem and you are a phenomenal poet. The emotion is shocking and I can completely relate to every line. Fantastic job.