What if i told you i loved you?

What if i told you i loved you?

A Poem by Lexi =]

What If I told you I loved You?

 

Would you tell me you feel the same?

Would you go out with me?

Would you smile?

Or

Would you diss me and forget my name?

Would you laugh in my face for everyone to see?

Would you make fun of me for a while?

© 2009 Lexi =]


Author's Note

Lexi =]
Just thought of it for a contest maybe its good... i dunno

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This is a nice poem that expresses the question that we all have when we really REALLY like a person and think we love them. Very nice :)

Posted 14 Years Ago
Good write but just to help you out Line 5 forget shouldnt have a space between for and get. Good write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Lexi =]
Lexi =]

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Hey! I am Alexis. Most call me lexi! (which I rather) and Im 13. I like all kinds of music. My main genres though are Dance and Electronic and Alternative and Rock. My favorite person ever is Mitc.. more..

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