His looks took my breath away.

His looks took my breath away.

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His crystal blue eyes, covered in thick long lashes. The way his lashes mad shadows on his high cheek bones, his smile, so perfect, straight white teeth, his squared chin, so strong and handsome.  His shoulder length blonde hair shinded alomost a golden color in the sun, his thick neck, put a collar on it and the collar looks like it was made out of paper compared to his thick neck. His arms, their as thick as my thigh and as strong. It makes my mouth water everytime he flexes. His chest is made out of nothing but pounds of muslces, his thighs are te same and he stands at around 6'4, his olive colored skin looks so beautiful in the pale moon light.

 His looks took my breath away.

© 2009 Pookie


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I'm not hating or anything, but SO WHAT! LOL...very nice lyrical illustration!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DAMMMMMMMMN i love it this duy sounds mad hot lol hmm wanna hook me up lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


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sooo good
iza

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on April 28, 2009

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