Alone

I walk this empty road with only my shadow and my heart on my sleeve. 

Only at the end will I walk with an army.

I take these steps with little in mind to what is around me.

I walk alone.

Never again will I know what true friendship means.

Never again will I know what it feels like to have people love you.

I walk alone.

My heart is forever in a block of black ice. 

It is sealed off forever.

Who will be the one to unfreeze it?

I walk alone.

Author's Note

Just been feeling by myself lately at school and at home. I don't know. Been depressed to. It's not like me. But anyways hope you like it. ^.^ Tell me what's wrong with it. Or w.e

Reviews

[Dark Angel]

Nothing's wrong with a poem of dispair. I write many, none are really good. I understand the feeling and you displayed it really well. Kudos. And it's ok to feel like that, everyone does at one point and time no matter how much they try to deny it. So it's good you notice before the feeling gets worse.

[Mathesaurus Rex]

Nice formatting~
I haven't seen much of that kind of color/font stuff on this sight.
The individual phrases are good, and I like the repeated "I walk alone." But the order of the phrases is a little bit disjointed and hard to follow.
Overall, I like it.

[Tears Forgotten]

This is really good... the format and style perfectly reflect the emotions... Well done...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

i like your poem i do feel the format is a bit overwhelming tho and you could have done it simpler but it does express resentment and getting lonely in a very subtle and unique way.

[We are young.]

I love this, I think its format is very unique as well. I like how you said "Only at the end will I walk with an army." That was my favorite line. The picture suits it great as well. Very relatable, sorrowful poem. We all feel alone sometimes